It was a hot and sunny summer’s day as Emma and her Family sailed out of the harbour.Emma and her Family went to their house.Outside the house it was small but inside it was very big.They left their suitcases and they went for a walk.Emma went with her brother to the shop.Emma bought a beautiful dress and her brother bought a car.Emma heard a strange sound.This sound was her alarm clock.Emma raelised that all the things that she imagined,was a dream!
By Jim Neiros
It was a hot and sunny summer’s day
What a beautiful story Jim!!!It got me hooked.